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Lori-Chan vs Caral page 17 by =Master-Kankuro:iconMaster-Kankuro:


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So, this is page seventeen of a funproject-comic of :iconshikuroxkanno:and me.

It´s about the story of our ocs in the Naruto-world...the storyline will develop with the time...so I dunno, what happens next, because the turn to draw the next page swich between us...

After :iconshikuroxkanno: demanted to write explanation about each page, I´ll do that now.

Panel 79-81: Kankuro tries to convince the others to realize his idea. And good-Kanky has REALLY good arguments!!! And finally he "kills" the other´s with his "Extreme-cute-puppy-eyes-no-jutsu"!!! NO ONE can resist THAT!!!!!

Panel 82-93: Yeah!! Even Baki must admit, that tey don´t have a better way to findLori-Chan and Caral now. So Kankuro summons the dragonpuppet. :dance: ( I LOOVE to draw a puppet-obsessed Kanky!!) After all sit on the dragon, Kankuro let it fly. (Look that the villigers, who see that thing flying from their houses. :XD:)

Panel 94-102: Meanwhile Kankuro and Co. search Lori-Chan and Caral, they still fight REALLY hard. Lori-Chan finally get caught Caral and grabs and bites in her, so Caral can´t escape now. Bur Caral kicks Lori-Chan in her stomach. Lori-Chan still grabs and bites in Caral really strong, so because of the kick Caral´s clothes got ripped and she bleed a bit.
It´s GREEN, which makes Caral MORE speacial!!!
(Yeah :iconshikuroxkanno: Caral bleeds a BIT... and because Lori-Chan flew fast enough, she doesn´t smell the blood. And NOW it´s again YOUR turm my dear. I REALLY REALLY hope that u like the story.)

Page 16: [link]
Page 18: [link]

Caral and Margay (c) :iconshikuroxkanno:
Lori-Chan, the Mídori-Ryu-Clan (with the WHOLE BIO) and the dragonpuppet (c) :iconmaster-kankuro:
Nearly the rest (Kankuro, Gaara, Suna..) (c) Masashi Kishimoto, the REAL creator of Naruto.
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ok, u did go against what i said about that Caral's skin is never shown

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Maan-no! But I REALLY wanted to do ANYTHING..
Lori-Chan is nearly bleeding to death and Caral even didn´t got any singls SCRATCH..that´s not fair...

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u could of just shown Caral's blood
i'm not mad that u did make her bleed

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What willf YOUR clouthes do, if a dragonish human like Lori-Chan bites and graps in them REALLY hard?
And that´s one proof, that her teeth and nails are sharp.

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yes, but in the Caral BIO her cloak is made from stuff like rubber and lead
also she has clothes underneath the cloak

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But for me it makes no sense.
How can someone bleed without ripped clothes?? And Caral doesn´t have inner injuries...and u didn´t wrote that they aren´t undestruckable of a kind like that

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the clothes can't be ripped but sharp objects can hit her skin
plus her blood can melt through her cloak

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...but u didn´t wrote that before...and I can´t change that..
Why there is nearly ALWAYS something which seems to be wrong and doesn´t makes your staisfied??

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ur postive i didn't write that?
??? huh???

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