So, this is page seventeen of a funproject-comic of and me.

It´s about the story of our ocs in the Naruto-world...the storyline will develop with the time...so I dunno, what happens next, because the turn to draw the next page swich between us...

After demanted to write explanation about each page, I´ll do that now.

Panel 79-81: Kankuro tries to convince the others to realize his idea. And good-Kanky has REALLY good arguments!!! And finally he "kills" the other´s with his "Extreme-cute-puppy-eyes-no-jutsu"!!! NO ONE can resist THAT!!!!!

Panel 82-93: Yeah!! Even Baki must admit, that tey don´t have a better way to findLori-Chan and Caral now. So Kankuro summons the dragonpuppet. ( I LOOVE to draw a puppet-obsessed Kanky!!) After all sit on the dragon, Kankuro let it fly. (Look that the villigers, who see that thing flying from their houses. )

Panel 94-102: Meanwhile Kankuro and Co. search Lori-Chan and Caral, they still fight REALLY hard. Lori-Chan finally get caught Caral and grabs and bites in her, so Caral can´t escape now. Bur Caral kicks Lori-Chan in her stomach. Lori-Chan still grabs and bites in Caral really strong, so because of the kick Caral´s clothes got ripped and she bleed a bit.
It´s GREEN, which makes Caral MORE speacial!!!
(Yeah Caral bleeds a BIT... and because Lori-Chan flew fast enough, she doesn´t smell the blood. And NOW it´s again YOUR turm my dear. I REALLY REALLY hope that u like the story.)

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Caral and Margay (c)
Lori-Chan, the Mídori-Ryu-Clan (with the WHOLE BIO) and the dragonpuppet (c)
Nearly the rest (Kankuro, Gaara, Suna..) (c) Masashi Kishimoto, the REAL creator of Naruto.